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Beating heart

The beat is like no other
The place is so comfortable
The sound is comforting but yet I feel my own body shaking

The beat is a sound of peace
The place is where I belong
The sound makes my world sound and feel right

The beat is correct
The place is correct
The sound that I hear this is where I belong

The beat I want to hear always
The place where I want to be always
The sound I never want to lose.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 5

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    and I am with you ..this is really very desperate structure of the emotion you have shared with all your honesty around..well done..and many thanks fowr sharing it...