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only thing you can do...

I know life is getting hard, and you feel you're about to break,
I know God is testing you, and you feel it's all you can take,
I know you're fighting hard, trying to make life just right,
I know that when you're in the dark, it's hard to see the light.

Life will get better, I can promise you this,
you'll get past all the hardness, and find a little bliss,
just keep your head up and keep pushing through,
sometimes in life, it's the only thing you can do.

I know right now, that everything seems so wrong,
I know that you're hurt and just wish that people would get along,
I know things are scary and you're not sure how they will end,
I know you feel you're broken and your worried you may never mend.

You're better than you think, you're stronger than you know,
one day you'll be able to stop all the pushing and life will just flow.
So hang on till then, we know you'll make it through,
just leave your trust with God, it's the only thing you can do.

Author notes

a poem to my mom...im not letting her know that i wrote it but i am emailing it to her.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Rose Angel gold member
    July 3

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    Kelsey...Your words bless my soul...for you do have that inner strength and loyalty to your dear Mom...and that is a blessing...Your words encourage me too...What rhyming and flow you have here...Keep penning luv!


    • nobodys-girl
      July 3
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      thank you so much for you comments on both my poems, it really meant the world to me.

  • Eusebius
    June 12

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    Oh, poem full of hope and promise! My only suggestion might be to make the lines a bit shorter, maybe 10 or 12 syllable to the line? But this is only a suggestion... a fine poem!!


  • Angels of satan
    June 7

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    Aww

    This poem has so much emotion and i'm sure your mom will like it.
    My favourite lines are " Life will get better, I can promise you this,
    you'll get past all the hardness, and find a little bliss,"


  • Karra-Mayy
    June 7

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    I Think That Is Well Good

    I Love The Bit Where It Say's:Life will get better, I can promise you this,
    you'll get past all the hardness, and find a little bliss,
    just keep your head up and keep pushing through,
    sometimes in life, it's the only thing you can do.

    I Can Totaly Relate To It

    Brill Write


  • Raining Kisses silver member
    June 5

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    this is excellent, full of quiet strength
    I love it, bet ur mums dead proud of you

    T

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