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Cotton Candy Love

Thoughts were moon closed
and all I could think was of him
my heart's dream
wishes that fumed vapor passion
cotton into the air white freash
invisible blooms "wind"
shimmer's in earth torquoise pool
could glow a fervestent light upon
my skin I not knowing could be
the shine where I am found
in this gorgeous ambiance
Cotton balls of tears were diped
into the blue sea floats upon
the sea shoreline
that once was the stones of tears
that break within the earth
I venue across this pink stardust
without the moon there
to take me through this night
where all becomes a shadow behind
trials becomes footprints
to my destination
in a lucky soul with lucky hand
but times are unlucky
does my prayer reach there
through this curl of night
as I try to balance on this strand of hair
something furry to lay my heart
on where this masculine pain
seems to want something soft
in this carnval world of lost
I only come to the  cotton candy
to feed these childlike emotions
from God and he gives it to me with
a smile














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