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A Glimpse Into Paradise



I shall not walk under ladders, for fortune fails to favour me

and I fear that fates fickle fingertips will push me too far,

throwing me into a whirlwind of misery -

a place I cannot breathe.


I know little about the aspects of nature,

though I try my best to paint beauty on my lips

when I say his name to the world.


I never used to understand dreamers, I thought them foolish

with their half hearted wishes and out of body life approach -

though I admit I was wrong, there is beauty in both seashells and spacewalks,

if you look hard enough you can do both

in your own place of comfort, in your very soul.

He showed me that and more, though I fear I become cliched

and therefore I hold my tongue and allow others voices to flicker

and tempt my words to come alive in lucid verse.

I do my best to live and love, but I need not try hard

for his kiss taught me all I ever needed to know about heaven.

Author notes

This is about the man I love
and boy what a man he is.

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    June 23

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    That last line is awesome. And my favorite part was the first stanza. Took my breath away! Thanks for entering my contest. I’m honored to read your work. sss

  • :]

    the last line.


    need i say more?
    good luck, xo

  • PROFOUND

    What a wonderful and astute observation! Howard

  • this is my all time favorite.
    beautiful!

  • though I try my best to paint beauty on my lips
    when I say his name to the world.
    -damn incredible.

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