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My Dear, When Will You Learn? [Men Need Signs]


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That isn't a throat, my dear
it just helps him speak lies
That isn't a heart, my dear
it just gives him life, so he take yours

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That gravel tunnel he calls a throat
needs a sign like a truck;
["Stay 50 feet back!"]

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Just in case he decides
to throw unsuspected
objects towards
your unsuspecting heart.

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    June 24

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    This is a really interesting take on the prompt - I like that this is directed specifically at someone, it gives it a great tone thank you for entering!


    Polly

  • Excellent! I love what you did with the prompt! Best wishes in the contest
    Gaylene