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That isn't a throat, my dear
it just helps him speak lies
That isn't a heart, my dear
it just gives him life, so he take yours
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That gravel tunnel he calls a throat
needs a sign like a truck;
["Stay 50 feet back!"]
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Just in case he decides
to throw unsuspected
objects towards
your unsuspecting heart.
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A contest entry
- prompt contest: gravel throat by Polaja.
700 points, ended June 24, 7 entries
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Comments
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This is a really interesting take on the prompt - I like that this is directed specifically at someone, it gives it a great tone
thank you for entering!

Polly

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Excellent! I love what you did with the prompt! Best wishes in the contest

Gaylene


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