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As it is

There is a grief
that surpasses
all understanding,
there is a pain
so full,
aching and cold..
Relief does come
yet reluctance withstanding
echoes of lonely
reverberates old

defying release
with a short rasping whisper
remember,remember
never forget
this whole wide truth,
demanding a name now

I will never be back there,
yet never forget


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  • individuality gold member
    July 22

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    a good poem but why and i am not picking on you in particular here, i say it to all i see who do this, why use half and half punctuation? it just looks mad either do it all the way or not at all


  • Ealdwyne
    June 5

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    Deep and emotional, I relate to this in my own ways. you are always such a beautiful writer and I am glad to see you are still here penning out your heart on this page.