She walks all alone on the dark steets
in her fish net stockings and tight leather outfit.
Her ruby red lips parted seductively
as she speaks her standard price
to a young man passing.
She smiles to herself
for she knows she has many miles
yet to walk and many young men
to teach the ways of love.
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prompt fallen angels
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Comments
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wow,another amazing write,this is awesome,great write
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Nice job.
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Well done on imagery
Thanks for the share
Darky
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Very well done take on the prompt. It's TOTALLY different than what my mind thought and I love that about this piece. Thanks for entering my contest!
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We seem to have here the hooker with a heart of gold not so much earning a living as teaching the unwary the arts of Love
Short and to the point, nicely balanced - however the title should be the prompt -- "fallen angels" but here you have used the singular "The Fallen Angel" and this changes the character of the prompt. -
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ahhh and I wrote this just for you. At least you liked it. That was a plus. Thanks for commenting.
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