Too dark, it seems my world is falling,
on my knees but never crawling.
Stuck, on either side it seems.
The past, always in my dreams.
The dark, upon me it creeps,
brightens up but never sleeps.
Silence, fills up my mouth.
Not even breath comes pouring out.
Faster, run quicker now.
They all have gotten smarter now.
Mirrors, fall into place.
All around, they show my face.
Water, underneath my feet,
all around me ten feet deep.
Drowning, I'm dying here.
Until you broke through so clear.
Raysia, you saved me so.
I broke so hard, you'll never know.
Right to the ground I fell and then,
You picked me right back up again.
Author notes
Written for Tinkerbelle2840. For a book she's writing called, "Breathe."
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this has got momentum it takes one into a rush of emotion your a talent miss very enjoyable indeed
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Fantastic rhyming scheme! I like the images of hopelessness and all but giving up and just in the nic of time, rescued by a saving hand. Very well written and a joy to read
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