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Oh, If I could fly!

I feel a tickle in my back
A tingle in my spine
To soar so high up in the sky
And make the whole world mine

To see the oceans strech across
To far beyond my sight
To dance among the starry skies
When day turns in to night

To play with all the fluffy clouds
And chase them from the sky
To catch the breeze and spread my wings
Oh, if I could fly!

I'd take that gold horizon
And hold it to my heart
And see the world, so beautiful
I don't know where I'd start

I'd see the Eiffel Tower
Reaching up so high
And then I'd smile and turn away
and fly, and fly, and fly!

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  • This is very inspiring and I like the imagery. Another allure of it for me was that the piece flowed very well when read aloud. I can easily fall into this one as I believe most couild.