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Juda

Just give me a little time to be okay
Over and over I'm falling for him
Everytime I close my eyes his face haunts
Yearning for somthing I can't understand

Joy dissapears as I look out to him
Our days together have come to a halt
Reality hits me like a crashing wave
Distance grows farther but my heart beats for him
Another last hope gone but I hurts more than others
Never have I felt such pin in my heart

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  • I have a good vision in this piece, think and admire what you penned, thank you for this entry...good luck
    Linda