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Under her skin.

And there she goes
Living her life in lie
With her paper,her pen and her painted on smile
She is his past,
While his future they now hold
She has been written off completely
And now she stands cold
Her emotions have frozen
her tears solid in place
her heart now skips beats
When insecurity is her slave
She is numb
she can't hear you
She is numb
she can't eat
She is numb
she wont respond
She is numb
she wont sleep
internally damaged
External is fine...
Leosha,Leosha please give me a sign
A touch,just a squeeze
let me know you're alive
Leosha,Leosha ....well are you alive?
Leosha is dead
She is damaged inside.

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  • wow this does flow lovely, and it really makes youthink.. at firsti thought it was depression, then a coma and then welll it was a real thinker. the rythme always nice good job froggy

    -Morphine♥

  • it flows great. It has great emotion in it too! good job =) keep writing!

  • great flow i really like it!

  • this is really good and the title fits really well, i really liked this....excellent