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Afraid to Talk

Always trying to stop crying
Always trying to speak, you never notice

I love you you have no clue
I stare at you with obsessed brat I am
Over reacting not being myself

I can't even say "hi" with my heart racing, my love for you
is still on

No one can know, No one can Ever know,
The Pain hurts, It burns
I wish you could know, to understand

Until now I'm afraid to talk
to even breath...

Author notes

LOVE IS MAKING ME SO DIFFERENT! I CAN'T HELP BUT CHANGE!
THIS PERSON BELIVE OR NOT MADE ME A BETTER PERSON!

Has your heart been pounding for someone lately that it hurt?

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  • Hippiechick2
    October 19
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    SWEETNESS!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!!


  • Naznomarn
    June 6
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    Awww that's so sweet!


  • HugsForEveryone
    June 5

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    I think this is a great poem. It seems you're longing for this person to know, but my question to you is, how would you feel if this person did?
    I know exactly how you feel. As Jyllian said, you are becoming quite the writer. Even if I haven't gone through what you have, your writing makes me feel exactly what you are. I never really expected you to get into writing much, but I can see I was very wrong!
    I just felt like stopping by and giving one of my besties a comment
    Well done!
    ~Kera


  • TAPSCreeperBabyBird
    June 5

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    It does hurt, I know it hurts. There is no way around it either. It's really a horrible feeling. I love the way you write, you are becoming quite the writer. Keep up the good work.
    Jyllian


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 5

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    Ah..the desires and the wishes are the hunger of the lovers and it makes a heart hurtful as well...love the feelings and its description as well..well done...

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