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Dave

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I have a little gray Tempo
It takes me where ever I go
But sometimes it stutters
At other times sputters
"Hey Dave, why're you going so slow?"

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I named my car Dave.  I did so after "Dave" in "2001: A Space Odyssey."  Now every time I get into the car, I say in my best computer-gone-mad voice, "Hello, Dave"
Written March 16th, 2004

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  • leannewales
    March 18, 2004
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    lol...Dave!!...awwwww...this was fun..light and airy...i enjoyed it...thanks for entering...hugs..leanne xxx


  • trumpetfalcon silver member
    March 17, 2004
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    Awesome

  • ellybelly
    March 17, 2004
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    I love this! I have a Tempo too, but it's a cream color. That's really neat. I liked your poem and I think it's really cute. Good luck in the contest!
    ~Elle


  • trumpetfalcon silver member
    March 17, 2004
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    Not yet . . . nor can he sing, "Bicycle Built for Two"


  • SusanL
    March 17, 2004
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    they are reliable, and they get you there... The two things most important in a car... cute little write... Dave huh??? has it taken over the trip planning yet??? Susan


  • Serene
    March 17, 2004
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    Clever has does it, with class!!
    Great take! A Drive to the winning line,
    Here's hoping Dave would not
    stutter or a sputter on the way there!!
    Take every care!!!

    ~Rena~

  • trumpetfalcon silver member
    March 16, 2004
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    It's a nice car - always treated me well . . . but not a Camero by any means

    That's pretty cool for you with your car situation Hope all goes well with it

    I really love to travel though - something I'll do all my life

    Thanks for stopping by and all my best

  • X2csquared
    March 16, 2004
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    haha nice.. i love cars and im glad mine isnt like dave.. i have a 2002 grand am i love it and im getting a camaro and haha get this.. im only 16!! i love my life.. incase ur thinking wow thatks for braging rich bitch this is not the case.. my parents bought me the GA to share with my mom and the camaro is my project car so yes i am lucky but it seems like ur even luckier i would die to go to any of the places youve been.. well except minnesota i alredy live there and im sorry you were put through the torture of going there it sux but ya know gotta do what you gottan due any ways i loved this it was different than alotta other things laterz ~X2c~

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