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All Around Me!

all around me is pain
i dont know how much
more i can take

my life is narrowing down
all around me is death it
would be much better

all around me is darkness
but no light shines through

all around me is my life
passing me by

i dont know what to live for anymore

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  • peaceimout
    June 5
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    Live for you! Sometimes the darkness becomes so consuming that it becomes hard to see reasons of life and living. That's when you have to reach really deep inside and grasp onto hope with all your might. This well written with expressions from the heart. Hang in there