Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Time for....Pug Bowling!

There once was a man,
Who did the can-can,
who loved to bowl with a pan,
And had a very bad problem,...he was tan.

Now this made him mad,
but he could only be sad,
It was funny to watch him, i felt bad,
so i went told my dad.

 

my dad said to not look smug,

and go make him some coffe in a mug,

but when i went over he took my pug,

then he said he look kind of snug.

 

he went pug bowling after that,

he bowled my pug on a mat,

and said mypug was fat,

i took my pug back after that spat.

 

the man who did the can-can,

and bowled with a pan,

he now had now problem with his tan,

but now i have a problem with this man.

 

 

 

 

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • o k np

  • Thank you for your entry, sorry but I am going to have to DQ as there is no real feeling of anger that comes from this write and therefore it doesn't fit the prompt. You are welcome to re-enter another poem...alby