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Bleeding Lilacs

Erupting lavender blossoms
tantalizing ones senses.
Hibernated eyes awakened
from winters slumber.

Discharging sweet aromas
concealing stagnant air.
Deep breaths taken
relishing springs revival.

Blossoms snipped,
aroma permeating air
as nectar seeps
death evident.

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    June 8
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    lovely imagery here


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    June 5

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    Beautifully written. I feel this way about
    cutting my flowers for the house. It is a
    shame that something so beautiful has to die.
    You have such wonderful talent. Good luck
    in the contest.