Non-fiction fiction
reality fantasy
Is this life all a dream
black and white
white and black
dark's and lights
shades of gray
love and hate
passion and pain
endless cliche'
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Superb
I rather like this one just as it is. You have expressed your thoughts in a unique manner. Thanks for sharing. -
Interesting
Well... it's a bit short - however, you can say a lot in a very little amount of time. I like where it's going... may need something to end it with... a one liner or something to make it have the feel of an ending - unless that's not what you're going for... lol Then that wouldn't matter. I really do like where it's going though. When and if you revise it I hope to hear about it.
I think this poem has a lot of potential!!
Great write!
God Bless!
-Jlynn -
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Very simpel but I did actually really like it.
Sweet and simple and too the point. Brava.
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