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I Tried to be Nice

Uh-oh there you go
Running your mouth
Halucinating again
Didn't you know
Sodomy is a sin
So here we go
Time for a new spin
Fella my pussy so tight
You couldn't even get in
Like a steel trap
I left you with a slap
Then I bent you over
Put a strap on in that ass
Grabbed my ball gag
To stifle your screams
Nothing this good
Ever happened in your dreams
But I know you liked it
Cause I could see the cream
Took that dildo I had in your ass
Gave your face a slap
Wiped it on your top lip
Leaving a foul mustache
Now lets hear some more smack
Oh wait you can't cause of
My handy dandy ball gag
Take that stiletto to your sac
To my surprise you moan
See I knew you liked it like that
Crack of leather leaves welts on that ass
Make you cry out in pleasure
Watch you squirm in pain
Standing in front of you
I come down on you like rain
Watch you quiver and quake
See you begging for some more
Leaning close I whisper
"I knew you liked being a whore"
Leaving you twisted broken and sore
So I will say it this once
I won't say it again
It's this Estrogen might
That makes your head swim
You don't remember where it started
But I assure you all
This is where it ends

Author notes

I tried to be nice. But I took out my last entry in this contest, and replaced it with this after I read the piece titled The Wild. This is a response to all the "cocky" guys who threw out the slammage. Hope you enjoy.

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  • Lowell Poe
    July 3

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    Ill be good ....i promise........
    but ya best not trust me or i'll take ya down to my tickle basement........
    where i will keep you till your breathless and begging......
    strap ya down on my table........lol

    Phewww......
    your bad....
    Liam


  • aceray
    June 27

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    If this piece you have right here has taught me anything tonight it's that I should never piss you off!!! Cuz you would put a hurtin' on me!!! LOL!!!

    Scaringly good piece!

    Rey


    • xPink-Lotusx
      June 27
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      Lol! Rey!!!

      Thanks so much for this wonderful comment! Good to see you back doll! Can't wait to get to that new piece!

  • Nice

    Great picture, imagery... nasty leaving a bad taste in my mouth, but it was so sweet! You know I liked it.
    "Nothing this good
    Ever happened in your dreams
    But I know you liked it"
    I was so relaxed when you slipped this one in Howard


  • DolceVito gold member
    June 6

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    LMAO...You're so funny, and hey, some guys deserve it write on, right on


  • cerridwen
    June 5

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    wow. that was awesome. really very clear. there was no denying what was happening. it was funny, in a way...that uncomfortable laugh people give sometimes, haha. I did like this. it's very good. very well written. Good Job!

    • Haha!

      Well look who it is! Thanks for stopping by and showing a home girl some love. You should read some of the ones I put up before the slam contest started. I think you would like those also. I will try to get caught up on your latest work. I have been so busy. Lol! Love ya and ty again for the indepth comment and the many applause!


  • The Hermit
    June 5

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    FUCK YEAH!

    That was fucking impeccable. I wish I could give more claps because you solidified the reason that you're one of my favorites.

    This is a new level of the no holds barred style I rarely see on All poetry . You took no mercy on this piece. I hope you win this. No advice I could give to make this better.

    • Well Well

      Look who shows up again! Thanks for the great comment dear friend! Glad to see you back in the game. Hope to catch up with you some more. Take care and thanks again for the great comment and gratuitous applause!

  • OMG... That was great!!!!! You inspire me. LMAO I love the part where you say "Make you cry out in pleasure Watch you squirm in pain"

    • Thank you

      Thanks for taking the time to read this and leave a great comment! I am glad that you enjoyed this piece. If I could rate comments, you would get a 5 star rating.

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