You said forever;
And promised me the moon.
But we failed,
Like all the other times,
Cause you gave up way too soon
There should have been sparks
There should have been more time
And after everything
And all we've been through
I thought you were mine.
But you gave up.
A contest entry
- Calm,funny any form by misticmoonlite.
725 points, ended June 8, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
-
aww this is sad, giving up is way to hard to do..
and to work it out is easier than one thinks at times, thank you for this entry...good luck
Linda
-
i think it is simple and sad but this is very common in young relationships...i think you need to put why you guys didn't work there should be a reason. not just we were going to be together....the end....anyways you have great thought in here jsut expand it....much <3 scars.
-
-
yea i think it does sound better when i added to it...thanks
-
-
no prob
-
-
Adding your comment:
