The artist dips her ladle in God's well,
then spills tiny diamonds on our souls.
As moon and sun play chase beyond her windowsill,
The artist dips her ladle in God's well.
Out in city nature noise she goes, and voices swell.
Snatching pictures from the air until she gets her fill,
The artist dips her ladle in God's well,
then spills tiny diamonds on our souls.
Author notes
Quote option: “There are some people who live in a dream world, and there are some who face reality; and then there are those who turn one into the other.” ~ Douglas Everett
This is an attempt at a triolet, but I am not sure about the syllable count...very open to criticism
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"This is an attempt at a triolet, but I am not sure about the syllable count...very open to criticism" You did excellently on the triolet. no criticism needed
Thank you for taking the time to enter. Excellent work and best of luck in my contest.
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When we follow God's will...
What a beautiful thought, inspiring.
Thank you for entering my contest, all the best .
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I am speachless wow!
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sigh!
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This is just a simple, beautiful writte.
Thankyou for entering my contest and best of luck.
peace
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That's ok. The contest has just ended, a lot quicker then I expected it to. Sorry, I'll give you 24 hours to get your entry in.
peace
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