To think I called you
My friend!
To think I called you
A lover.
Things were never good
Between you and I.
I loved you
Then you betrayed me!
You told me you loved me
That you never wanted to lose me...
Then what do you do?
You become my enemy!
You ask me what I think...
well, You know what I have to say?
FUCK you!
You are a wortless piece of shit!
You are a cheater,
and a deadbeat father!
You never cared about me,
Or your son!
If I had my way,
I wouldn't have anything to do with you!
Fucking bastard!
Asshole!
I tried to make it work,
But you didn't want it to!
So you can eat shit and die
And go fuck yourself!
Author notes
This is to an ex... he got me pregnant, then cheated on me... hell, even before that he did! this is a big "FUCK YOU!" to him. I am still... somewhat friends with him, not exactly friends, more so I just talk to him when I have to... that's it. lol. but yeah... hope you like it...
Please Tell Me What You Think
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good job on saying f you 2 him any man who cant take the responsibility of fatherhood should learn not to use what he has to make babies or get it cut off. as a father of three and only 2 being mine it really irks me when a child wont step up and help out what he made.
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Feels good to get that shit off your chest I hope. Writing is FREE Therapy. It's a shame how many men are scoundrels and I guess there are men who could say the same of women. Great emotions spilled over onto this page. I hope you find someone deserving of you.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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You become my enemy!
You ask me what I think...
well, You know what I have to say?
FUCK you!
You are a wortless piece of shit!
You are a cheater,
and a deadbeat father!
very powerful..so much emotion here. Im lucky enough to have been given a great dad, but my step...well moms new man is the total opposite..so i relate to a certain extent.
I think so many people can relate to this..wonderful write. -
I love works like this, completely raw and full of emotion. And the anger! I can feel it radiating off this piece!
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wow!! this is some heavy stuff you are dealing with here. I am so sorry that you are going through all of this. I think your courage and strength to write about it and share shows great promise for a better tomorrow. If you need to be mad right now...you go ahead and be mad!!! peace and light, Kendal
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thank you!
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A true masterpiece
true raw emotion...u can really since the anger and haterd in this poem i've loved ur work and still do love you TWiZTiDMaggot!
ur fionce,
ladudejw Muah! -
wow
there is some anger and passion here....well written......great stuff
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I tried to make it work,
But you didn't want it to!
So you can eat shit and die
And go fuck yourself!
I can totaly relate.
things do however get better.
amazing write.
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