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Putting It Out There

Putting It Out There
by Moxie

PUTTING IT OUT THERE
By - Edskie  For: Lindalee

Putting pen to paper makes
Inner voices very clear.
Of a desire no longer secret
For the cosmos (plus one) to hear.

Positive thoughts are focused,
Projected strong and true.
Encouraged within my spirit,
By the joy of knowing YOU.

Some logic here for you to see,
Although there doesn't need to be.
Even Mr. Spock would likely agree
That YOU and I are synergy.

There's nothing for you to fear, my dear
Nor anything that will smother.
Just smile and breathe new essence here,
We've just begun to love one another.

A hand to hold while traveling
This confusing mortal abyss.
It all distills to two souls as one
And it all comes down to this. . .

True intention ignites the ether,
Twixt rhymes both common and clever.
I will be the ONE you kiss,
For now... for later... forever.

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    Great Write.

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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    June 6

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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    Your flow and rhythm in this was impeccable! You really put it out there in this poem!!! I liked it, alot!
    Welcome to AllPoetry! I hope you are having fun on this site, and if you need anything, feel free to IM me!

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  • Welcome to AllPoetry!

    I absolutely love this, it is so beautiful. The ending lines are literally the perfect ending and say so much. What a wonderful piece of writing.

    Welcome to AP. If you have any questions or need help with anything, feel free to IM me.
    Keep expressing through writing.
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