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Breathless Reminisces

Look at me.
Look into my eyes
mesmerized
hypnotized.

Ears ringing loudly
thunderstruck
hand on my neck
lips on mine.

Foreheads entwined
smiles between kisses
omnipotent love,
breathless reminisces.

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  • emochild
    June 28
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    I really love this.


  • Amazon Huntress
    June 9

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    love this, very sweet. the final stanza could probably work just on its own, the rhythm of the rest isn't as smooth and the perfection of the final stanza makes that stand out more, but still I like it
    *~Huntress~*

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