Oh little Samantha i am so sad
That you will be leaving this earth
But remberer that heaven is nice
And its like a brand new birth
According to revelation its better
And your life will be immortal
Just think it as an escape route
A get away from cancer portal
When you come up to me
Goodness you will see
As you died in pain and suffering
You will live free from that pain
I'll show you my love for you
And you'll meet new people
So as you died of the Big C
Think of it as being freed
From all that pain you have
However hard i try to say this
I can't put it good enough
Author notes
Do you have any chance of survival or is it full-blown. I really do feel for you as i'm 13 and couldn't imagine living with cancer.
A contest entry
- Jesus Talks To Me by SamanthaSam.
625 points, ended June 7, 12 entries
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To be free from pain. A wonderful thought. This poem gaveme a lot of comfort and i thank you for writing it for me. I would love to have you for a cousin.
Hugs, Sam I Am -
A well written piece of poetry, so very sad though, but happy and sad go hand in hand, a part of life and death.
Regards.
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Well, i just wanted to try and reassure here did i manage it.
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So as you died of the Big C
Think of it as being freed
From all that pain you have
However hard i try to say this
I can't put it good enough"
awe so sad.
this was beautifully written. -
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I felt so sad writing it for the poor girl.
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