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By the way, I love you.

I know I'm not pretty
I know I'm not cool
I know I don't make you laugh
I know I'm a loner at school.
I know I'm not very smart
I know I'm not at all thin
I know I can't be what you want
I know that I won't ever win.
I'm sorry I'm not pretty
I'm sorry I'm not cool
I'm sorry I can't make you laugh
I'm sorry I'm a loner at school.
I'm sorry I'm not smart
I'm sorry I'm not thin
I'm sorry I'm not what you want
I'm sorry that I won't win.
All I do is wrong, I know
All I say is wrong, I know
All I feel is right though.
But I know you don't feel the same.
So to conclude my apologie of being me,
I am the one that I blame.
I know its not quite me you see.
I'm going to say I missed you,


And by the way, I love you.

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  • BlindingLove
    August 11
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    ::Good Luck::
    xoxo
    xxScarletBeautyxx


  • individuality gold member
    July 2

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    a good piece, full of sighs and sorrow and apology! but i suppsoe love makes us feel so at times, we grab on to the wild gasps and live in hope even if we feel unwanted and worthless.


  • The.poet.of.hearts
    July 1

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    not poetry at all
    kind of hip hop song.
    i liked it and i didn't like
    well it need to be revise

    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • daddysgirl1
    June 7
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    that was so beautiful i absolutly loved it...


  • Heva Feva
    June 6
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    Great job. Good luck and thanks for entering my contest.
    -heva

  • XxLoveMeDeadxX
    June 5
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    Deep. Very deep. I love it.

    Very poetic and I understand the meaning clearly. Very good. No wait, awesome. Very awesome.


  • Fallen-Thumper
    June 5

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    So to conclude my apologie of being me,
    I am the one that I blame.
    I know its not quite me you see.
    I'm going to say I missed you,


    And by the way, I love you. <--- loved this bit.
    I've felt like this aswell and it is an amazing write... really sad though but brilliant. Tears came to my eyes. Loved every word.


  • XloveXnotesX
    June 4
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    AAWW i love it, i feel the same way! very sad


  • iLYChristian G.
    June 4
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    AWWW.!!

    I FEEL THE SAME WAY ABOUT SOME THiNGSZ.!!


  • angelfalls.silently
    June 4
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    AWWWWWWWWW! THAT WAS SO SAD!!!!!1

    I LOVED IT! IT MADE ME CRY! "im sorry that im me"

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