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Bonsai

          Living poetry,
                      Trimmed
      Growing within
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subtle changes in my life,
altered paths seeking harmony
....in arms reach, and that
which I survey from the
stillness and the light
accepting the wind
and her enticment.

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  • Kevin Moderators member
    June 24
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    too short! expand it a bit, describe more, and give it a sense of emotional meaning...


    • Darmok
      September 8
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      thanks for your read

      added a bit.

      I was shooting for concise; but I know you like expression!