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I Miss You..!!

The moment i saw you, i wanted to hug you and cry;
But could'nt even express my joy, forget the pain howmuch so ever i may try...
My life goes on, on what road, wherever it leads to, only with a slow lonely pace;
Only My feet move, my heart and brain still, with a smile on my face...
All i remember is that smirk on you face and the glitter in your eye;
All i can recall is your hellos and not even a single little goofbye...
Still as i take back a look at my life, turning back pages;
You seem to be lost, missing since ages...
If one thing god would let me ask for, i'd wish 'YOU';
Just a little thing i want you to know is that how much do I MISS YOU...!!

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  • Welcome to AllPoetry

    Beautifully touching; the raw emotions opened up the imagery in this piece wonderfully, captivating me from beginning to end

    I hope you enjoy AllPoetry & continue to share your words with us

    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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    • Thnx a lot..

      thnk u so much 4 da lovely compliment.... dis one z really close 2 my heart...

  • Welcome to AllPoetry!

    This is full of feeling and imagery. I can see you standing there, almost waiting for something to return. A beautifull piece with a touch of sadness to it that makes it all the more real. By the way, love your name.

    Welcome to AP. If you have any questions or need help with anything, feel free to IM me.
    Keep expressing through writing.
    Storm
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    • i agree..

      i actually kept waiting 4 dat sm1 2 atlst turn bck nd luk at me atlst once...
      nd thnx.. take care.. god bless u..!