I look at you one last time
Hoping to feel something inside
Instead I'm empty with a broken heart
Only wishing we could go back to the start
To when it was just me and you
And being in love was all we knew
But then we changed
Our love for each other, rearranged
But still we kept clinging on
Refusing to believe our love was gone
Yet still we continued to fall apart
Leaving us both with a broken heart
And now you're back after many years
Loving you again? My biggest fear
I need you to go, I need you to leave
But still I want you next to me
I look for the answers in your eyes
All I can see is your past lies
I ask you to leave, our memories too strong
Strangely, You insist I've led you on
You leave my thoughts in disarray
And as you turn to walk away
I look at you for the very last time
Only it's different..
I feel nothing inside
What did you think?
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*need title*?
i think for a title go for something thats not going to give away anything in the storyline
brokenhearted suggests the ending whereas you should remain unsure like at the begining
really amazing poem i love this and the emotion youve put in... outstanding -
Hmm, compelling ending...like when dizzy love evolves into chaos then clarity. I understand that yearn for dizziness despite the resolve in a clean slate.
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thank you
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bravo!times3
this worlds so small, ive been in that situation and you couldnt have described it better. beautifully written.
for a title maybe , Our past, brokenhearted... idk but whatever you find im sure it will go well with it.
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thank you so much! it is a hard feeling but the relief felt when you move is incredible! I like your ideas for titles, I just cant find one I like.. but I kind of like a combo of yours "Our Brokenhearted Past"
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it really is...its refreshing.
ahhh. see your good. i like that one alot. didnt even think of it like that.
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