Such a perfect fairytale
A boy and girl in lust
Until the mirror shatters
Showering the world in broken trust
The tree of Eden is dead
The apple rotted to its core
Sleeping Beauty's a decaying corpse
A kiss wont do it anymore
The seven dwarfs are broken men
Each with a sorrid past
The little mermaid drowned in tears
When she realised forever doesn't last
There's no such thing as a fairy tale
The genies lamp wont shine
There's no hope of a final kiss
Since you told me you're not mine
There's no screen that reads 'the end'
After a slow dance in the rain
Just the real world and a broken girl
Alone and filled with pain
There's no magic pill to bring it back
Just a bottle of whiskey for the pain
But as I drinks my potion down
My fairytale is real again...
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first one in aaaaaaaaaaaaaaages, let me know what you think
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I agree with you.Fairytales don't exist and finding happiness is difficult.I liked the imagery in here and everything was well written.The second stanza is my favorite.
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Wow.....
I LOVE THIS!!! this is an AWESOME write! my fav lines is "Sleeping Beauty's a decaying corpse
A kiss wont do it anymore"
Awesomeness! great job!
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Life is no Disney movie, that's for certain.... I liked the rhyme in the piece, since it added a little levity to an otherwise depressing write. There are a few grammatical/spelling issues, but they're easily fixed. Thanks for posting—hopefully inspiration will prompt you to write a lot more very soon.
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