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A Cross To Bear *Revised

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1 Peter 4: 12 Dear Friends, do not be surprised at the painful trial you are suffering, as though something strange were happening to you.

 

 

 

Sometimes we must stand alone*
As trials come our way*

Tho' Jesus will never leave us*

'He'll be beside us each day*

Friends at times may dessert you

When your called to stand alone

Remember Jesus is beside you*

He made your heart His home

Don't think it strange*

When persecutions arise*

 Jesus told you these things*

  Precious one, your  faith is being tried*

We all need a cross*

Gods to teaching us patience*

His long-suffering was a cross*

To  clothe's us in perseverance*

 

 

 

 



 



 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Iron Saint
    October 29

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    Very Good

    Think it not strange Sister! I see that you are merely holding the pen as well. When it comes it just comes does it not? And woe to me if I preach not the Gospell. Stay Strong Sister!
    Agape James


  • Whispers of Hope
    October 16
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    This is such a well written piece beautiful! So full of truth written from the heart God Bless always~


  • Mystic-Fire
    September 14

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    What a very wonderful write of inspiration very nicely done, I really like the flow of the piece, and the wonderful meaning in the words.

    He made your heart His home
    Don't think it strange
    when persecutions arise
    Remember Jesus told you these things
    precious one your faith is being tried

    what wonderful words these are beautifully written dear poet. the only thing I can see that might need fixed is this line:

    Down a and winding road*

    I am not sure it a word is missing or what??

    fabulous write though I loved it,
    keep the pen flowing!!


  • AlexandraHamilton
    September 6
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    An uplifting, inspiring poem. Keep it up!


  • darlee77 gold member
    September 4
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    I like this one. Very wise and beautiful. God bless.

  • very good poem with evry good internal expression and meaning i like this poem very much

  • pkoirish
    July 30

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    truly wonderful

    Sharon this is a very inspirational poem.. I enjoyed and felt much satisfaction when I read this wonderful poem.... I really enjoyed these lines... But a loving hand to sustain and uphold

    friends sometimes may dessert you

    When you feel you're alone

    Remember Jesus walks beside you

    He made your heart His home

    Think not it some strange thing

    when persecutions sometimes arise

    Remeber Jesus told you all these things

    As your faith is being tried

    We all have need of a cross

    To submit to the Fathers will

    In the storm He's growing patience in us


    Thank you so much for your words..
    Patrick


  • Denerica
    June 4
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    Well said...amen...He made our hearts His home is extrodinary. Beautiful flow again sis. Blessings.

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