When I first met you
I felt something tugging at me
deep down inside.
My heart began to pound faster.
My breathing began to quicken.
At first I thought it was a heart attack
but then it began to dawn on me
that this was the beginning of something more to come.
Ever since that day that I first met you
we have built a bond that has only been shattered once
by the fool hardiness that was driven deep down within me
but now all of that is gone
and my love I find myself happy like I never been before.
A well placed paw here
another well placed paw there.
The look in your eye says it all
as you give way to me.
A little kiss here
a little kiss there
are just some small things that turn you on.
I wanna kiss you all over my love
and lay you down upon a bed of silky red rose petals
and unleash the inner tiger within me
and corral that wild untamed beauty that drives me crazy.
Under the moonless starry sky
I want to unleash a savage roar
as I slide my paws all over your warm silky smooth body.
As we enter into our climaxing moment,
I want to feel the intense warmth of our bodies sliding together
as we become one and pass out
within each others arms!
Author notes
Prompt: I Wanna Kiss You All Over
Credit Perfectsunset aka Megz for the title 
Thank you my friend.
To the contest holder the very best of luck in judging
A contest entry
- I Wanna Kiss You All Over. by Poetryintheblood.
700 points, ended June 11, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments welcome!
Comments
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That was hot you can see the steam rising, Oh dear that's not just steam
mmm oh well go with the flow great write
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Excellent bro, congrates on the HM for sure.. You just laid it all out there Tiger!
Keep up the awesome writes, I really like the passion, and romantic as well touches you placed upon this poetic page with your pen within. THanks for sharing, and I'll read ya laters. Peace.
Bro Timothy
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'I wanna kiss you all over my love
and lay you down upon a bed of silky red rose petals
and unleash the inner tiger within me
and corral that wild untamed beauty that drives me crazy.
Under the moonless starry sky
I want to unleash a savage roar'
This whole, I can't call it a stanza but i'll name it as section, is delicate and defiying, it makes my stomach turn, longing for someone to love me like that, to hold me in their arms and wish those very things, to see me as the ocean, calm and respectful, housing the most beautiful scenes until you reach my core where an infiri of wild untamed mosters wait raging in the bottom of hell it's self.
The whole peice is wonderful, it just shows there are some truely stunning poets out there, I take my hat of to you and invite you for some
any time 
Best of luck,
A fan of yours,
Goreck.
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i loved the way you described yourself as a lion and used paws, instead of claws, as if your touch was soft, this is a sensual poem that inspires vivid images great write man xx kt p.s keep penning!!!
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Deep
so sensual yet beautiful,love the flow and the intense twist to this write...my fav part"I want to unleash a savage roar
as I slide my paws all over your warm silky smooth body.
As we enter into our climaxing moment,
I want to feel the intense warmth of our bodies sliding together
as we become one and pass out
within each others arms!"
keep it up,
Fouzia,
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this was beautiful. good write
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Excellent
'tis a very good write, indeed, my friend. You have expressed your thoughts quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
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this is just the most romantic, honest view of love I have read around here in ages! great job. thanks for sharing. keep up the awesome work..peace and light always in all ways, kp
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Here Kitty Kitty You Meow Me
Purring helplessly with each caress of paw
Mewling wildly with minds eye crying more
Pussycat Pussycat won’t you please stay the night
There’s a tiger in me that won’t put up a fight
Gnaw on me muzzle me and scratch where you will
Your symmetry’s perfect your poem a thrill
The burn of the fire that I see in your eyes
Like glint of steel razor that seeks my demise
There’s a jungle of confusion in the twist of your heart
What dread hands What dread feet? Prey where should I start
What anvil? What dread grasp? Dare your deadly clasp
You’ll love me, then eat me, ‘cus love’s never fast
The art of your seduction was pleasing to me
This poem a reflection of just how funny
I imagined myself betwixt bed sheet and claws
As you licked me to death with each word of yours
Ps, I apologise here and now for borrowing slightly from Williams Blakes Tiger tiger Burning Bright
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Thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Whoa! You are really good with the sensual writes. A lot of people try to do this and they just turn out sounding cliche, but I loved the spin you put on this about 1/2 way through with the "tiger" concept.
"unlease the inner tiger within me" made me burst out laughing I found it really funny for some reason.
Another well penned write! Maybe you should write some more sensual pieces?
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Gorgeous...
Beautiful sentiment, high passion, feeling the love...
A touching piece that moved me in its depth of feeling...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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This is beautiful my dear nephew
So honest and true are the feelings and experiences you share here in this lovely poem.
That is when you know it is the right one when you go through so much together and despite everything, you beat the odds!
true love will last through any obstacle!
I am so glad to see you so happy, sweet Paul
hugs and love to you both always,
Aunt Lynda
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Damn! O.O...this is really good, such romance beauty between the two of you, I could feel the love and passion within every line. I really like this. :] It had a little too much passion for me to see xD but I enjoy every line. ^^ got me thinking now like this for school. great write it really got me going >.> *cough*
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You are most welcome,
and it was my pleasure
coming up with it for ya!
That is so kind of you to
place me in your author's
notes, thank you
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your welcome.
I would never take credit for the title no matter what.
Plus I always give credit to those who help me and in this case your helpful comment really caught my eye and well I like the catchy title which is subtle but fits nicely and well I wanted to be sure that I gave credit where it is due
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Wow, what a beautiful romance
shared between two lovers, you
have depicted here. Such beautiful
portrayals of passion and untamed
emotion roaring from within
the core heat of this poem.
This was a truly captivating
read, and I very much enjoyed it
Hmm, and as for titles, here's
some I thought of
Sensual paws
Untamed fervor
Carnal urges
Our love is skin-deep
Hope that helps! -
holy moly I wasnt expecting this O.O its good, you can really feel the passion here paul. Crickey you nearly gave me a heart attack xD warn me next time kai?
great poem!
hope you and jen are good and uhm? passionate =DDD
x
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