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Let me let this go

there is darkness in me
a fetid pool of acid
that etches my bones
with stories of
failures
of my worthlessness
i see the paintings in
my blood. i see the
beauty in brokenness
and the pain is better
then the breathless panic
of insanity
let me let this go
let me fill this hole
let me know myself
against what i am
let me let this go
let me let me go
let me let this world go

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  • castles-black-night
    June 11
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    Awesome

    Usually I don't read other poems but I thought this was great.


  • ajocean silver member
    June 4
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    great piece thanks a million for sharing