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Requiem for a Swallow

Sorrow, sorrow, song of swallow
Sneers and spurns, stones ne’er be hollow.
Strikes thee one, then from thy nest
Wretched, falls thy beating breast.
Swallow, swallow, song of ‘morrow,
‘Er thee sing in haunted hollow.

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  • ScarsFade
    June 3

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    I think that is one of the most interesting swllows in a hollow i have read about all day...i like it it's very sing songy i feel like i could make a little old world song with it....keep writing..much <3...scars.