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Quiet Lavender

Enchanted dream to be believed
to be shown are like the secrets
to magic is she so she keeps her virginity
like worth for it's the only dollar
she has left for her pure hunger
Sweet beauty shouldn't climb the
tree the man should climb up
to where her heart lies up there
hanging underneath
the sky like a precious diamond
she is supposed to wear on her ears
for any jewerly on her
would let her seem overwhelming to bear
graceful in her flow
like the color of lavender
but he does not know
whom he's talking too
let the background
be lavender
so he can notice her
all he sees is a women there
as like a bald women
he does not notice the
face but the hair

Earth princess grape elegancy
delicous brown and plum lips
gorgeous face of grace
gentle she moves like a doll does
but when the wind blows
her hair gently he noticed
the sillheute of her face
with her sweet steady gaze
as if she is upon a hill

his eyes looks then falls 
upon his knee


that's all to make
her pleased
and then so to walk away
as the gorgeous earth lady








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