At her worst
her most blind
her least informed
—right now
for instance—
I would trust her
with everything of me
over all others...
When she hurts me
it’s not so bad:
~At least she loves me~
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I'm so afraid of being hurt, because it happens so often, that I lash out at people who have never hurt me willingly, and try to push them away...well, she won't let that happen anymore, and it turns out I have finally matured out of completing those old habits.
I don't care what you think. I know it needs editing. It's pain, not poetry. It's to take the edge off, not impact the world. Fuck the world. Fuck everything.
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I guess the qiestion I want to ask is, "Who is the "she" in the poem? A part of you I assume. It's always interesting how people divide their personalities into segments. Maybe it makes it easier to isolate or to identify.
Of course maybe "she" is a real person, which of course changes my comment slightly.
Either way, it's good to find ourselves and the beauty that is within us. I'm glad you are feeling stronger. -
Yay, I'm glad you've matured out of that!
Once again, another great poem.
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Yep. Partially thanks to you
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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Aaaaaaawww~
Sweet One~ I hear Ya and write away~
It hurts to feel You in pain
I wish You Happiness and much Success...If it helps to take the edge off...then Heck~ You are teaching me much-...I need to write more often then I am sorry You are hurt and have been, I don't wish it in the future
You are Loved~ I Love You for ALL You are~
let it out~ I'll be here to listen~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart
Best wishes in all You do
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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Thank you SO much! Without my wonderful friends--like you--I'd be much worse off. As it is, I'm feeling wonderful about this comment
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