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daydream girlfriend song

Lets try to get along
It's overcast, so quiet
I want you to belong
It's cold, tonight
So lady stay with me
And turn off your phone
You're my Panacea
Without you, i'm alone
So lady just stay here
Exhausted, so worn
With you I feel no fear
and I can sleep 'til dawn













Author notes

Listening to Empty's response - Ataxia. This is about being alone, and the human need for love. Its hard for me not to poo-poo the idea too much. I've not had much luck in that department. i like this one, its more emotive then i expected (intended) when i started writing it.

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