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who is who

Who is who?
You came to me glowing
With all your stars showing
Planted seeds and made me see
But is my sight my own
or yours for the choosing
You broke me
Burned the life out of me
Deceiver playing countless roles
Betrayer so near 
I am used here
What world have you delivered me into?
The one I trusted above all
My mentor my father
How can I remove you?


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  • duana
    June 10
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    wow now that is dark...