choking back tears
that refuse to appear
grief takes it's cues
from the one who ignores
turning both their backs
leaving the lonely
to suffer
alone
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What love would do for many wonders lay undone, unfinished in the eyes that do not take notice as the very back of them has turned to the greener pastures over the horizon where lies the untold truths of broken hearts and fallen angels.
I like it, I like it so!
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very sad,,,,,but very true....
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Alone and lonely aren't the same things, and I like that you used that to your advantage here. I also dig the subtle rhyme. Thanks.
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But they are merre shadows we must cast out. the crackling of thunder silently looms for those that seek the divinity of true love. and naked and alone i dream of such wonders.
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Thank you so much Bob for your kind, insightful comment. I really appreciate it.
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