aha, alas
the curious mind
unfortunately altered
by expirience not time
you search for trouble
danger too
well i have got
something to tell you
the curious mind
the devil's playground
searching for answers
until they are found
questions unanswered
treasures unfound
things need to add up
like a source to a sound
just be wary, my friend
for the devils cruel tricks
for the flame is all tempting
to be fueled while it licks
but things cannot be unseen
cannot be undone
what horrors can come
from just plain old fun
well now you should know
that tempting roses have thorns
now all i can say is
you have been warned
What did you think
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I don't know how you did it but just having the title being a warning not to read it made me feel so cautious as I was reading it. It made me feel like I was gonna be stabbed from behind once I got to that last stanza. Im never usally paranoid but this poem definitely made me be.
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wow, ok you compleatly got me on this one! I saw the title and then instanly felt guilty after reading the poem! I always have been a curious mind. Thi sis a great poem it's like a trick! <3 i love the idea, wish i woulda thought of it!
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Very good, I love the title cos it just made me wanna read it!
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Nice
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