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unconditionally, or why else would i sign?





                    without a doubt?


why

can't i trust you not to...

[shall we say...]

pull the rug out?

run a sword through my heart?

feast on my misery and memories?


but i don't know...

is that wrong?

Author notes

an attempt at stagger-y writing

mph. funfunfun

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  • checkmate-
    June 15

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    I love this!

    *grabs your poem and runs away with it*


    I love how you spaced it out - the layout was really cool.

    As was the poem.

    Obviously

    IU!

    ~Checkmate-