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Depressing Flapjacks

Screams for the endless fight
Fought through this endless night
Damned souls all do dwell
In this Earth-disguised Hell
The poor fall before the wealthy
The weak fall before the healthy
Those already doomed to fall
Are forced to crawl while the rest walk tall
The threatened soldiers fight their own
For fear of being overthrown
Traitors are prided and treated well
But unable to win in this Earth-disguised Hell



No one wins in Hell

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