Tonight is,
the first time we haven't fought
in almost six months.
Despite what you think,
I still love you.
If I lost you,
I'd never find someone else
better than you.
Tonight is the night
that I've fallen for you,
yet again.
Without you,
I could not live.
Not even for one more day.
Someone that could
take your place..
Someone like you..
is impossible to find.
Author notes
I came up with this while listening to the song "Fall For You" - Secondhand Serenade. Enjoy.
For the hell of it, here is a link to the song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FKi125iqnFg
What did you think
Comments
-
I like the use of stanzas in your poem and this is very flowing. doesnt have a fhyme but its very abstract. I quite rather enjoyed readinhg this piece in partiular. I cant wait to see what other wonderous pieces you create by justa a spark of though. Great job!
-
awesome
Just keep going love your work. Make the poem have some rthm and less work. You stress to much to write relax and let is flow. It's like a river just go with it.
~Danny Higgins~ Love ya
Adding your comment:
