What whispers won't say
the heart hums in harmony
with another in quiet unison.
What whispers won't say
the eyes affirm silently
in a knowing gaze
What whispers won't say
the skin speaks with trembling
vibrato to fingertip caresses.
What whispers won't say
the soul feels, hears, knows
beyond all doubts or fears,
the subtle existence
of love resonating
throughout the universe.
In a list
A contest entry
- what whispers won't say by sweet arrival.
800 points, ended June 11, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
All comments are welcome!
Comments
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you've captured it so beautifully. thank you for entering


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very good
it was as if i could smell your scent around me

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Aw I like this. Your words hold so much beauty, feeling and emotion. Very well penned, excellent skills and a delight to read, best of luck in the contest


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Amazing
it simply whispers elegance and charm, nicely done...

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This is a favorite of mine that I've bookmarked. I love how you use What Whispers Won't Say...my favorite part :
What whispers won't say
the soul feels, hears, knows
beyond all doubts or fears,
the subtle existence
of love resonating
throughout the universe.
so very soulful, and heartfelt and soft and beautiful, and romantic. Thank you!

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A beautiful idea so well written.


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marvelous...truly

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