I look in your eye,
I don't see what i want to
Why is it?
Is there something wrong with me?
Why don't you feel the same way?
I ask these questions to myself,
Before i go to sleep i think of you
I'm thinking of you now writing this,
And i know when i close my eyes,
There behind my eyelids,
I will see your face.
So clearly you'll be there,
As if your right in front of me.
I miss you,
Every night, Every day.
Why can't you feel the same way?
Author notes
This is about no one inparticular ( only one person knows and im gonna keep it that way! lol ). this poem wrote itself 
Please tell me what you think. Be honest. Thanks to all.. *happy*
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Tell him Ellie! you know you want to. hehe.
What if he likes you back and you just don't know. Back to the poem, it's really great, I like the last part, "Every night, every day. Why can't you feel the same way?" I think it's beautiful. -
Awww. This is a really good poem. I think i might have an idea who this is about. Your a great writer.
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Great Poem Sis. EVEN I DONT KNOW WHO YOU LIKE!! :-( I Agree No Need To Revise Its Great... Who Do You Like..? Lol Noseyy Me :-) Love YOu Loadss xx
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lol see ellie u like someone and its true!!
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o its a mystery
:-) how cute... U must like someone....I wont ask.. Its cute tho.
I really enjoyed reading this.. I understand this totally... I wonder the same thing..
No need to revise this. This poem speaks for itself.. beautifully written... good job
*Kelsi*
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im gona bugg u now!!
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p.s.... u like someone...
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wow 100/10
I enjoyed reading thiis it's mysterious in my point of view...?
okay...believe it or not...im confused now?!
do you see what u do to me?!
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Amazin
That describes what I do too. lol
I won't ask but this is just moving. I shall sleep with a melacholic heart but this is just unexplainable.
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thnx soo much for the comment x
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