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Dear Diary [5]

Dear Diary,
Me and Lindsay today
we went to the shack
we smoked some pot
we hung out

Dear Diary,
My parents notice something different
I shrug them off
Lindsay calls
we go to the store
on something
she calls a stakeout

Dear Diary,
We start choosing stuff we like
she choose the most expensive thing
shes the best for dreaming like this
knowing wed never get anything

Dear Diary,
She gave me an idea
on how to get the stuff we want
we go in late at night
and take what we wont

Dear Diary,
She and me see the news
it shows the robbery
we are scared but know we are fine
we continue to hang out

Dear Diary,
everyone at school
was questioned
even us
we sighed in relief afterwards

Dear Diary,
My doorbell rang
the police showed up
she was with them
and pointed at me
"She did it"
she said
as my eyes opened wide
the cops search the house
they find everything
lindsay had hidden everything in my shed
framing me for her plan
she smiles at me and waves
as she walks free
and as they
take me away.

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Sorry for the delay...I NEED IDEAS.

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  • A friend backstabbing you is one of the hardest pains in life to go through some say.. but it does make for a good poem or song.. loved it


  • Dryad Enya
    June 7

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    incredably sad that she was given away, you have a grate way of writing and though this will sound weird i did enjoy reading it! keep on writing!

  • i loved it

  • good job bro

  • backstabbing friends are worse than anything...you did an awesome job of showing the emotions.

  • oh, the frame of pple who betray you. U need ideas? i dont think i have any, sorry. cant wait for the next one, i need to know what happens next.
    *smile*

  • ... the nerve of some people, framing their own best friend, that's so mean but I like it.


  • Rya
    June 3
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    the shadeyness of some girls...this was good...keep it up...=D


  • Jazzlyn
    June 3

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    really good.... if you need ideas I could write one and send it to you then you can choose what you like.

    • You are aloud to write one D:...
      Just tag it differently like: Dear Diary [Officer Entry] OR something

  • wow i like this one

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