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My AP Dad

My virtual Dad is perfect
He watches over me
He’s not a man to contradict
I met him on AP
It’s time I wrote a verse for him
It’s time to praise him with a hymn
It’s time I wrote
It’s time I wrote
He fills my heart right to the brim

My on-line Dad is Johnny D
He’s always by my side
I know that he’s protecting me
I feel his love inside
I love him so; my Tiger Dad
With him around I don’t feel sad
I love him so
I love him so
Be nice to me or he’ll get mad

His Birthday comes this time each year
And I want him to know
I’m wishing him some Birthday cheer
And all the love I owe
I dedicate this verse to you
I’m sorry it's so over due
I dedicate
I dedicate
This verse for all that we’ve been through

 

 

 

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  • Andre ben-YEHU
    July 9

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    Beautiful...


    Anyone who is privileged to be mentioned by the Pen of a Poet of the magnitude of the author of "My AP Dad" has the blessed light of Mother Poet.

    Happy New Year to the Tributee.

    Blessed be the quill that flies diffusing scent of gratitude.

    In respect and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

  • Purrsanthema
    July 7
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    The trijan form, the way you've used it, perfectly captures your enthusiasm and affection!

  • Topnotchsy
    June 23
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    This is a beautiful tribute, and I love the form used. Congrats on a well deserved gold for this.


  • penman gold member
    June 23
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    Excellent

    Such a terrific write. And as always such a great use of form. Congratulations on the gold.


  • Desire gold member
    June 5

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    Precious~

    Oh My I imagine this will bring a smile to his face Love this and I could not help but smile myself
    Excellent Dedication from the Heart!
    Excellent form too~ You busy bee You

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart
    Best wishes in the contest
    with love & light~ Desire~*~



  • capricornpoet
    June 4
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    on proud AP dad

    love bequeathed by a lovely poet ..sweet it is


  • Swangrnv gold member
    June 4

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    aaww..

    now aren't you the sweetest? this is a nice dedication piece lady, and as usual done with a flawless pen!


  • Cup-a-Joe
    June 3

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    Very special poem. I know he will love it. You are such a good daughter.

    Joe


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    June 3
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    Nice trij.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    June 3
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    Aww, awesome dedication. I didn't know he and I shared the day. ...


  • JohnnyD gold member
    June 3

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    Cubbie, this is simply wonderful, it truly is. But my real treasure in our relationship has been you-
    watching my back all these years.

    Love ya gal



    Dad


  • Raspy
    June 3

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    Excellent

    This is beautiful
    Through and through.
    What a beautiful gift.
    You're such a brilliant poet,I don't have the words to describe what your poetry does to me.
    Hope youre keeping well.tc
    Arlena


  • Azgar
    June 3
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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    June 3

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    A dedication and birthday wishes as only you can do, I'm sure he will love this.

    Love,
    Sue


  • PerVirtuous
    June 3
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    You are the queen of tributes. Bravo.


  • Legend silver member
    June 3

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    I am not familiar with Johnny D but i am sure that he has to be someone special to have this wonderful tribute to him, from this exceptional poet Excellent


  • Rovingone gold member
    June 3

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    Gosh, old dad must be just blushing with pride at his daughter's sweet tribute. Excellent as always.


  • HaleyMary
    June 3

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    Beautiful write for your AP father, Amera. He is so lucky to have an AP daughter like you. JohnnyD is one of the most awesome poets on the site. Good luck to you in the contest.

    Haley Mary


  • maralisa silver member
    June 3

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    aw amera a wonderful birhtday dedication good luck inthe contestmaralisa


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    June 3

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    Amera,

    Your poem is simply lovely!
    Your JohnnyD is a awesome man, and should
    be recognized! you did it so beautifully

    Blessings

    Rend


  • cricketjeff gold member
    June 3

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    I predict an outbreak of broad grinning in Texas!



    Superbly done for one of AP's finest

    Jeff

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