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does anyone hear me

does anymore hear me
i'm down here looking
i cant find you anywhere
where did you go

thats you leaving me again
you cant hear me cause you dont wanna

your with that other chick
you come home late sayings you worked late
no you wasn't

no one hears me when i scream at night

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  • A very sad and deep piece of writing here. This is full of anxiety, agony and mistrust. There is also a deep sense of loss in this too. This is dark and full of anger. Your emotions really come out in this Judy. Good writing.

    Dark Wishes
    Wayne Leon