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School Is Out!

School is out this year
Summer's finally here
No more sitting at a desk
Playing outside is the best
So take my advice while summer's here
Have a lot of fun before next school year!

Author notes

This poem is writen by one of my classmates. So I shouldn't get the credit.
I will be most happy if you comment and I will tell her what you thought of it.

What do you think?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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Comments


  • Antebellum
    June 4
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    very good.
    I really like the rhyme here..
    your friend did a great job.


  • maralisa silver member
    June 3
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    aw wonderful write thank you for sharingmaralisa