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Mind Fucked

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look at the dots
then look again
count all that you see
bet you can't get past ten


your eyes are going
your brain has turned to muck
congratulations, my friend
for you've just been mind fucked  

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Written March 16th, 2004

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  • Methusala
    May 4, 2007
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    my mind. . . it feels like. . yes. . . it must have been. . . fucked. . .


  • Touchof1der silver member
    May 4, 2005
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    Okay. I am not sure I enjoyed this as much as you did. I am going to be seeing these damn squares for a week!! This is really trippy! This is all Barbara's fault. She made me come here. I think she was getting back at me for some contest thing?
    ♥ Kimberly


  • TanyaB
    July 20, 2004
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    ouch! i've seen this one before...it's all coming back to me now


  • S A Adelmann
    April 15, 2004
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    Hahaa - I have this same background, but I haven't found a reason to use it, yet...you certainly did. Nice work...you need to write more, darlin.

    Scott

  • Glass Coffin
    April 5, 2004
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    I'm getting a mind fuck just trying to read the words on this background. In all honesty I did enjoy this and just HAD to read it because of the title. You don't pass up a title like that. Good times, good times.

    Peace and rebellion,
    K


  • Rainna
    March 22, 2004
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    Dude totally awesome poem. I LOVE it. But the background, well they're gonna drive me crazy so this comment must be short. Great job! ~Rainna~


  • PseudoVoid
    March 18, 2004
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    and in the poem, is "be" suppose to be "bet"?


  • PseudoVoid
    March 18, 2004
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    hahaha, I love it, I've seen the dots before, but they seem a lot more effective as your background here. Great idea, great write.
    ~Amanda~


  • tony1kanobee
    March 18, 2004
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    Kooooooool. . .the dots. . .mmmm. . .I have seen this illusion before, it does fuck your m9nd, doesn't it? Genius to write a poem about it. Sheer genius, Cryptic-Haze!

  • F Etc
    March 17, 2004
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    you're hurting me
    dont do that man

    Oh my eyes are broken.

    bleh

    Jadey xXxXx


  • poetry within
    March 17, 2004
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    lmao how cool is this! i love the title it made me want to read the poem right away,i love the idea behind the back ground thats too cleaver,bravo on a unique and awesome write.(gotta love the title though lol)

  • Cryptic-Haze
    March 17, 2004
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    Thank you everyone for your comments. I didn't make this background, but it's been giving me headaches for years


  • Meridian
    March 17, 2004
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    Insane!!!

    Hahaha! I don't know why I'm laughing cuz I feel kinda ill watching your friggin dots, well done dude you definately f*#ked my mind up! X(",)X


  • ms-cuddles silver member
    March 17, 2004
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    Amusing

    This is really cute. This just so happens to be one of my favorite illusions. To see someone has used it as a background is such a treat. Nice work and great choice of backgrounds for a definate mind fuck. BRAVO


  • FallingDeep
    March 16, 2004
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    great

    this is evil! NICE WORK!

  • KayMMIV
    March 16, 2004
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    nice

    this is a really cute poem. well written, flows well. i like the idea of writting it based off of a background i'm assuming you yourself made. but even if you didn't, this is a good idea and very well done at that. nice read.

  • Cryptic-Haze
    March 16, 2004
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    Sorry that the text isa hard ot read in areas....it was tough getting a color that would show throughout.

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