The captured thoughts within these lines,
like echoes of myself, repeat.
An endless round of reasoning
~ reflect as mirrored thoughts reflect ~
an endless round of reasoning,
like echoes of myself, repeat
the captured thoughts within these lines.
Author notes
Peili
Peili- Finnish for mirror
It has 7 lines.
Lines 1+7, 2+6, 3+5 are repeated
Line 4 has the same beginning and end word.
Each line is 8 syllables.
Any meter is fine.
Must be centered.
My own creation.
What do you really think?
Comments
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Oooo! I never heard of or read this form before. At first I thought it was a Triolet but I like it better. I can see quite a few uses for this form and I think I can use it for several different genre. Bravo!
Love,
Amera♥
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You like this form? I made it up. I'd love to see what you could do with it! xxxxx
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Outstanding, Excellent Writing
Your own creation! What is there to say? I'm speechless.
In your photo you look like a young child. This must not be too recent a picture.
Thinking about your new form some more, I could be wrong; but it appears to me that there are so many requirements here that it will be hard to write in this form. How many subjects could you write about? You can probably prove me wrong.
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Wow
Pretty interesting form, Mo. A little complex but very neatly done. And, done sounding Mo-ish as well. Nicely and cleverly done as always ma'am.
Hugs and love to my daughter,
Dad
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I'm so glad you like it!
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Oh, I do like this, indeed! Complex! But most lovely! Shorter than the Kalavaha, but still excellent!!!
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